Mistakes
smaller than old drone
when I go in holiday I take drone with me
they don't see the different between Germany & Poland
Solutions
smaller than the old drone
when I go on holiday I take the drone with me
they don't see the difference between Germany & Poland
Mistakes
depends of the day
Yesterday it’s a terrible score
a friendly clime
a lot of family
a lot of park where I can take a break
my job is care 2 girls
my 2nd language that I decide to learned
the pronunciation don't is very perfect
the most difficult was communicated with this family
I can choice with Spanish or Japanese
one my manager asked me
'can you gonna take..'
the first girl in this family
change your traditional
Solutions
it depends on the day. In English we always say 'DEPENDS ON'.
Yesterday it was a terrible score
Good weather
a lot of families
a lot of parks where I can take a break
my job is to take care of 2 girls
my 2nd language that I decided to learn
the pronunciation was not perfect
the most difficult thing was communicating with that family
I had a possibility to choose between Spanish or Japanese
when my manager asked me
‘are you gonna take...' - ‘are you going to (go out this evening)’. We write the full form of ‘be going to + infinitive’ - to speak about the future
the oldest girl in this family
change your traditions. The word 'Traditions' is a noun. If a word ends -al it is probably an adjective.
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