Mistakes
I don't like celebrate my birthday
we are in 3 people
there are no strange rumours
I do shopping
what do I say instead do
Solutions
I don't like celebrating my birthday
there are 3 of us
there are no strange noises
I go shopping
what do I say instead OF do
Mistakes
I saw the last 30 minutes about Real Madrid & Bayern
arbitro
you have not money for the month
an army such big
there was a lot of people for the wars
Solutions
I saw the last 30 minutes of Real Madrid & Bayern
referee
you don’t have money for the month or you haven’t got money for the month
Such a big army
there were a lot of people in the wars
Mistakes
applicated for the 2 master
I think I take a decision
my favourite representation in the theatre is 'Cats'
I don't like the musical in general
in the middle of the Lombardy
I don't wanted to eat anything else
I grew in a family with parents who....
Solutions
applied for the 2 masters
I think I made a decision - we say to make a decision
my favourite play in the theatre is 'Cats' - play is a noun as well as a verb. You can say ‘to watch a play’
I don't like musicals in general
in the middle of Lombardy
I didn't want to eat anything else
I grew up in a family with parents who....
Grow, grew, grown
Mistakes
my recently gift I received next month
th recently gift to do
during her celebrated birthday
she don't speak in English
she always have a smile in her face
Solutions
-A gift I recently gave to someone was a doll which I gave to the girl I am babysitting.
The recent gift I gave
during her birthday celebration
she doesn't speak in English
she always has a smile on her face
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