Mistakes:
I would like introduce you Paul again
she do some mistakes
they love learn English
she's thinking in moving to Scotland
they was thinking of going
I need ask permission to my government
the relation between different administration
I didn’t know where was that music
When people is Polian, Russian
Apart of his duties
Solutions:
I would like to introduce you to Paul again
she makes some mistakes
they love learning English.
she's thinking of moving to Scotland
they were thinking of going
I need to ask permission from my government
the relationship between different administrations. Remember to put and pronounce the 's' at the end of most plural nouns in English. This is one of the most common mistakes Spanish students make!!!
I didn’t know where that music was (coming from)
When people are Polish, Russian
Apart from his duties
Mistakes:
another times, if the company doesn't do the contracts properly...
can make a sanction on that company
the prefer take that risk
another times
on other hand it depending on your style of teaching
rarely they spend even 40 hours
in public schools we work to the government
most of teachers in my school...
I can prepare my speech during 10 minutes (duration)
they are particularly focussed in the structure
Solutions:
other times, if the company doesn't do the contracts properly. If you say 'times' in the plural, then you need to say 'other' not 'another'. We only use 'another' with singular nouns.
can put a sanction on that company
they prefer to take that risk
at other times
on the other hand, it depends on your style of teaching
they rarely spend even 40 hours. Adverbs of frequency (if they are only one word e.g. rarely, often, usually) often come before the main verb in a sentence.
in public schools, we work for the government
most teachers in my school...
I can prepare my speech for 10 minutes. We use 'for' to talk about duration in English.
they are particularly focussed on the structure. This is an example of a collocation. Collocations are tested a lot in the FCE and CAE exams.
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